2nd Draft Editing

Today I spent my 2hours editing our second draft that is due in today. This is crucial for the group as it will then give us a guideline as to where we are interms of marks and levels and also how our opening sequence can be improved.

I feel relieved that we have our 2nd draft done and that it is much better than our first. Once we get feedback from our class we will then change this into a quick time and upload it onto you tube as we did with our preliminaries and first drafts.