Our one-to-one session

During this lesson our media teacher decided to give us feedback on what needs to improve and what needs to change in our first draft of our opening sequence.

• Ms suggested that we keep the pace slow as it emphasises the femme fetale's power; Mica indicated to her that one of her idea that we could use to change the opening sequence is by speeding it up. But Ms thought it would be better not to do this.
• Ms also indicated to us that we should make the collage like a list- so she suggested that we start again. And that we should use more close up shots to show what it is.

• We need more props

• One of the most important things ms gave us feedback on was the conventions; as one of the main conventions is lighting so ms suggested that we buy a flah light to stick to the conventions of the subject. So in order to get a range of lighting contrast Ms decided that we should use a flood light to film in the dark, as a lot of shadows are used in film noir.
• If we are going to use the flood light we should consider filming this twice once with the flood light and another without the flood light.
• Ms liked the idea of the heels and she said that it just needs too be filmed better, one way in which we can achieve this is by putting the camera on the floor when filming Mica's feet (keeping the slow pace walking)
• One thing we missed out was putting up the distribution company.
• Ms suggested that we could use flashbacks- of how the femme fetale's cictims died.
• We should include illustrations as to she is going to kill the investigator
• The femme fetale should call the investigator to tease him about his gullable frame of mind.
• We could include of voice over of four different killings