What we kept from the feedback we were given

From the feedback we were given the things we took on borad was the flashbacks showing the killings of the men, and we filmed this on the 22nd of April. We also used the idea of the femme fetale looking up at the clock three times showing the importance of the time.

And also the the idea of using different shots when the femme fetale is having a conversation with the investigator.

Most importantly: Shortening the dialogue between the femme fetale and the investigator and using her voice over; also the idea of the investigator having an envelope with the picture in it was alos a suggestion from our teacher. Instead of having a pro longed dialogue between two people.