what we did as we got a LAST CHANCE!

During this week we were told that we were allowed to make ammendments of our opening sequence.

So what we did was we changed the voice over as it was very low; and also we were told that the sound was very confusing as there was a lot of background noise. So we changed all this to make it a lot more clearer.

Here we alsdo fixed the music as it was overlapping and did not fit the action happening.

THE MOST IMPORTANT CHANGE: was the types of shots used; we need to include more close ups in order to make our ideas clear. E.g. a close up shot of the book to show the killings.