My Main Idea- The Stages

On this slide I was told that the information on the slide is to long so therefore i would have to make my idea more clearer by using bullet points.



I then went to seek help about what I could do to improve this presentation before I presented it and I was told that I had to shorten a couple of my slides and to be a more more specific especially in mr story board. Here i was given constructive critisms feedback from my teacher and she told me that i needed to cut down on what iwrote and only mention the specific and important information.


Due to my late start in the course, at first I was unaware as to what to include in my presentation; even though i was given a sheet giving me exact details I first came up with a presentation that lacked alot of detail. And the feedback I first received was that my understanding of the genre was limited, and this was what my first draft of my presentaion looked liked,